Unsolicited message from a complete stranger 200+ miles away. I changed nothing except deleting her email addresses and adding emphasis in spots:
"How are you doing? I was browsing through profiles saw your pictures thought i would say hi and I would love to get to know you maybe we can start as Friendship first. I'm new to the whole online dating thing I will keep this very short and hope you can email me . Well **hears** my e-mail add it **would be very easier** to correspond you can send me a message through ( snip) or (snip)I **hope to read from you** soon .
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"How are you doing? I was browsing through profiles saw your pictures thought i would say hi and I would love to get to know you maybe we can start as Friendship first. I'm new to the whole online dating thing I will keep this very short and hope you can email me . Well **hears** my e-mail add it **would be very easier** to correspond you can send me a message through ( snip) or (snip)I **hope to read from you** soon .
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